This is my writing based on this image. Hope you like it!
As the rain falls onto my thick cloak I squint too look in the distance. The storm has been going for hours and if me and my companion, Luna don’t find shelter soon then we might not make through the night. As I look around I see a red spot in the distance. I call out too Luna, “I think I see shelter. Let’s get there quickly” I shout over the wind. “ Okay” Luna calls back. We wrestle with the wind to move forwards. I only takes a few minutes to get too the town but it seems like hours. When we make it to the huge red houses we rapidly get inside the closest one. Its cold but it’s better then being in the wind and rain. I light a torch and look around. Luna is sitting beside me and I wonder when the storm will end. Then slowly I fall asleep. When I woke up the next morning Luna is still asleep so I look outside, Its raining. Not a storm just rain. I turn back to where we took refuge last night during the storm. I see two little hooks on the wall and I decide to use my rope and make a washing line too dry all of my clothes. Then I realise that it’s a little bit dark so I light my lantern and look around and what I see amazes me.
”Wow” I whisper.
KIA Ora,my name is Sundus and i'm from Room 23 at Owairaka District School.I really liked you're blog post about you're ''Writing''I remember when I did something Like this making it look really interesting for the viewers or bloggers.
ReplyDeletehave you ever tried it before you post it?
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blog you later,Sundus❤😈.
Hi Sundus, Thanks for checking out my learning.
DeleteDid you do writing on this image? If so you should send me the link. I do sometimes make it look interesting but sometimes it isn't what it looks like. Thanks again for checking out my learning!
Blog ya later,
Saana