Tell: Grace was shocked!
Show: Mouth open, Grace's body tensed and her eyes opened as wide as the sun
Tell: Lily was excited
Show: Squirming in her seat, Lily let out a high pitched squeal. Her eyes widened and clasped her hands together so tight it looked like it would take years to undo them.
Tell: Stephanie was sad :(
Show: Bottom lip quivering, Stephanie's knees bucked and tears gushed down her face like a waterfall.
Tell: Piper laughed.⊙△⊙
Show: Clutching her sides Piper fell over in fits of giggles. Her eyes closed as she tried to control her laughter
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